Saturday, October 27, 2007

3 fall haiku, looking up

a mourning dove hung
on the wire line one evening
like a long soft blade

we two lay supine
and looking up, the branches
burned? were not consumed?

then sleep under the
smoke detector’s speck light, to
wake in giant moonlight.


T.R. said...

when it blinks, does that mean "everything's ok" or "everything is defintitely not ok?

kel said...

very nice, sir.