Saturday, October 27, 2007

3 fall haiku, looking up

a mourning dove hung
on the wire line one evening
like a long soft blade

we two lay supine
and looking up, the branches
burned? were not consumed?

then sleep under the
smoke detector’s speck light, to
wake in giant moonlight.

2 comments:

T.R. said...

when it blinks, does that mean "everything's ok" or "everything is defintitely not ok?

kel said...

very nice, sir.